I just found out about a fabulous-ly fun contest called the FallWritingFrenzy. Here is my entry, based on one of the inspiring photos, 200 words or less.
THINGS
ARE NOT ALWAYS WHAT THEY SEEM
Here they were again.
At the
bottom of the stairs in the same place, the blanket, the open book and the cup
of -
What
exactly was in that cup anyway?
Marla
thought about what had happened when she poured the liquid down the sink the last
time, the smell and those sounds. For a moment she thought
she would be sick.
One thing
for sure, she had to take care of it quickly before Margery saw it –
Or Dad.
The last
rays of the setting sun illuminated the yard. Yet Marla felt more than an
autumn chill
creeping towards her. She shivered.
Last time
she had bundled the items up in a box and left them by the river.
Yet here they were again, the same blanket,
the same book, the same cup.
She
remembered what Grandmother had taught her, “Things are not always what they seem.”
This time Marla
picked up the book. She read the words on the page.
So that was
it.
Sitting down
on the bottom step she wrapped the blanket around her shoulders.
Then Marla took a sip from the cup.
I love a story that leaves me thinking. Really nice:)
ReplyDeleteYou create such great tension and suspense. I want to read on to find what is in that cup. This would make a great writing prompt, too!
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing this creative story with us for the fall writing frenzy! Sincerely, Kaitlyn Sanchez
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